Archive for July 16, 2010

“So you think you can WRITE” and my student’s accolade

The above title is a twist on the American t.v. series “So you think you can dance.” A kind of taunting challenge to those people who think they CAN dance.  I will have a four part series related to the subject of writing, something close to my heart as a writing teacher.  It’s always nice to get e-mails from my former students who I taught freshmen composition to.  An e-mail message I got from a Ukrainian student yesterday was a real picker-upper for me!  She CAN write!!!

I first met L.P. in 2006 in Kyiv, Ukraine and she was one of the “Fabulous Five” who had been on the FLEX program in the U.S. Such an exchange program is well worth the American tax payer’s money as it brings talented students from all over the world to U.S. high schools for their last year of study.  Needless to say, it is highly competitive among students in the former Soviet Union to go to the U.S. and L.P. was one of the “lucky” ones. We admitted four other former FLEX students to our freshmen class that year, making for a very dynamic mix with the other Ukrainian students whose English skills were not as high as the Fabulous Five. Now my former student is a newly minted graduate at a westernized university in Kyiv where Ken and I used to work at.  This is what L.P. wrote (I did not change any of her wording except the names of people and places):

Dear Mrs. K: Writing to you again is such a pleasure right now! I do hope you remember me. I was your English Composition student in WIUU about three-four years ago. That was your last year in Ukraine if I am not mistaken.

I have recently graduated. Now I am a Bachelor of Business Administartion and International Management. All these are nice and serious words, aren’t they? You know, four years of living and studying in Kiev, in our university, changed my values and views so much. I do not believe in words anymore. I do believe in actions.

Such a memorable event as a graduation ceremony made me thinking a lot about those four years I spent in the walls of our university, about people I met there, about things I was given. I understood that I do not believe in my diploma with high honors. I only do believe in what I have succeeded to learn and take from what was given to me either materially or spiritually.

Writing is a skill I learned from you. You are the one who has succeeded to awake in me extreme love for writing.  Sometimes writing is my only way out. That is what I want to thank you for, Mrs. K. Many thanks for those energy you invested in working with us, in working with me.

I have heard many things about your new academic achievements! My congratulations! How your life is going on? I do hope you and your husband are doing fine:) Tell him big hello from me))

I enclosed the picture of me in academic cap and with diploma) You might not recognize me as i do wear glasses often) It is me anyway) It would be nice to see some of your pictures also))

So, I would appreciate a lot if you find some time to answer me. … And staying in touch would be a great idea)))

Looking forward for your response)

Sincerely yours,
Lucky Penguin

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